Charlie's Chocolate Factory

When I was in second grade, we had writing times when we would write stories. I loved Roald Dahl, so I wrote a sequel to Charlie and the Chocolate Factory and Charlie and the Great Glass Elevator. Here is a transcription of my story. I took many of the elements directly from the books, not really understanding the jokes of the book; for example, I thought Willy Wonka was genuinely going deaf, instead of pretending not to hear.

CHARLIE'S chocolate factory
CHARACTERS:
CHARLIE BUCKET, MR. WONKA, MR. BUCKET, MRS. BUCKET, GRANDPA JOE, GRANDMA Josephene, GRANDMA GOERGINA, GRANDPA GOERGE, OOMPA LOOMPAS

TABLE OF CONTENTS
1. PARTY AT THE WHITE HOUSE P 2
2. WILLY WONKA'S DEAD! P 5
3. SUPER SUCKERS! P 9
4. N-Suckers and square pops P 12
5. Mr. Wonka's funeral P 15

1. PARTY AT THE WHITE House
"Welcome, Mr. Wonka," Said President Gilligrass. "I'm very proud to meet you." "So am I." said Mr. Wonka. A bee fly flew in Mr. Wonka's ear. "Get out you stupid fly!" Snapped Mr. Wonka.
"Oh," Said President Gilligrass. "I have invented a fly killer. See. This is how it works.
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The fly climbs up the ladder and sees sugar in the bowl, so he climbs down the string and when he's at the bottom he says 'Ho ho, they want me to go in there.' So he climbs up the string. But I have left out one of the rungs out on the other ladder, so he falls and breaks his neck."
"Bravo! Bravo!" said Mr. Wonka, but Charlie, who had more sense than that, said, "Mr. President, the fly probably wouldn't go on that, and anyways, if he did, on the spot where you left the rung out, he would
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fly and not break his neck."
"Oh," he said, "I never thort thought of that."
They went on wit
"Exactly what language were you speaking in Space Hotel .U.S.A.?" Asked President Gilligrass.
"Uh-uh-uh-uh-u---" "Oompa loompish?" asked Charlie. "Certainly not," said Mr. Wonka. "It's too close to english."
"Oh," said Charlie, and the party went on.
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2. Willy Wonka's dead!
"We must go back to the factory," Said Mr. Wonka. "Bye," said President Gilligrass. "Mr. Wonka," said Grandma Josephene, "remember to call your ear doctor when we get back."
"I get deafer every day so remind me to call my ear doctor when we get back"
"Never mind, that's what I said." They went out side and got in the helicopter.
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"I can't wait until I get back in bed," Said Grandpa Goerge. "Oh brother," Said Mr. Wonka. "you get out of bed for a party then you get back in bed."
"You meddling old mackerel," yelled Grandma Goergina. "Let's just get in the helicopter," said Mr. Wonka. One hour passed.  Then a mouse said to charlie, "There are two holes in here, and two of them are better than one."
"Mr. Wonka," said Charlie, "You know how you said two
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holes are better than one? Well, I just heared heered heard a mouse say that."
"See, it's true."
Then they got back to the factory. "Mr. Wonka," said Grandma Josephene. "remember to call your ear doctor!"
"I get deafer every day," said Mr. Wonka. "Call your ear doctor!" Mr. Wonka went
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towards the telephone. Then he croaked and fell down dead. "Oh no," said Charlie. I have to take care  of the factory now."
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3. SUPER SUCKERS!
I'm going to make something, charlie thought. So he went to the inventing room. He put some rasberries and strawberry seeds in the pot, put the tempreture on 356° feranhite. In a minute there was a sucker shaped like this:
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It's a pretty weird sucker, Isn't it? Well charlie sucked on
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that sucker for 30 minutes, then he was finished. Then he made another one, but this time, it took 30 seconds. He ran to the Chocolate room with the Chocolate river and Chocolate waterfall. But this time, he ran twice as fasat. (Grandma Josephene, Goerginea, Grandpa Goerge were all in bed.)
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"Grandma Josephene," yelled Charlie "I will give you this sucker and you will be able to run around." Grandma Josephene took the sucker and sucked on it for one hour, then Jumped five feet off the bed and ran around.
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4. N- Suckers and Sqaure pops
I want to see how strong I can be, thought Charlie. He went into the inventing room. He tried to make a Super Sucker, but he forgot the recipe. This time, he put strawberries and rasberry seeds and turned the tempreture to 354°. It took 15 seconds this time. He sucked on it for 15 minutes, then he was done. He tried to run, but
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he ran the same speed he ran before he had the Super Sucker. "I will call this an N-Sucker because it's the first letter of normal and it would be dumb to call it Normal Suckers. He made one for Grandma Jose phene. "Thank you dear," said Grandma Josephene. Then Charlie made another sucker, nobody knows how he did it, but this is what it looked like:
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It's a cube, isn't it.
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(This is charlie's chocolate factory.) [Inserted because another story was in the notebook]
He sucked on the sucker. When he was done he was all square.
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5. Mr. WONKA'S FUNERAL
Charlie went to show his Grandparents. "We must get you in shape," said Grandma Goergina. "Do a somersault." Charlie tried to do one, but since he was sqaure, he stood on his head.
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"Uh oh," said Charlie. "Today is Mr. Wonka's funeral, And I wo'nt be able
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to go to it,"
"Do'nt worry dear," said Grandma Goergina. "We'll round you out."
"But how will you?" Asked Charlie.
"I'll rub your head," said Grandpa Joe. "But how will you if I'm up-side-down?"
"I'll pick you up," he said. And then Charlie felt himself being twirled in the air.
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"You're rounder!" exclaimed Grandpa Joe. So he kept twirling him.
[What follows is an extremely OCD depiction of every single body part and an attempt to show how Charlie gradually got rounder. Eventually I got tired of doing that.]
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"Youre very round!" shouted the twerler.
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Now I'll show the eye, so you can get a better view.
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See Charlie [inserted because the story was interrupted by "My Leprechaun"]
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Charlie
from #23 in eyes
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"You're very round" shouted Grandpa Joe. It was true.
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Now im going to show the lips.
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They did his neck, which took 4 twirls. The did his armpits, which 2 for each one. Then they did his hands.
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See Factory [another interrupted story]
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Factory
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Well he was twirled many times and when he was round, he was glad, for he was very dizzy.
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"Let's g to Mr. Wonka's funeral now, said charlie.
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His parents came in when he said "Funeral now."
"What Funeral?" his mother asked. "Mr. Wonka's" he answered. So they started to leave, but an oompa-loompa said, "Where are you going, Charlie?"
"Willy's Funeral," he said
"The drums," said Grandpa Joe
Than the oompa Loompas began to sing:
"Boo Hoo, Are Willy Wonka's Dead. But Today We Will see him again with Charlie."
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"Short Song!" Said Charlie.
Then they left. At the Viewing, Charlie could see him smile.
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In the funeral he heard the person in charge say, "The 5 Children who got the golden tickets will speak. Augustus Gloop." The fat
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See Charlie's
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Charlie's
boy went up. "I hated Mr. wonka, because he would not let me drink out of a chocolate river! I'm glad he died! He deserved it!" then it was veruca salt. "I hated that Mr.! He would not let me have a squirrel!"
Then it was Violet Bearegaurde. "I hated him! He wouldn't let me have a piece of Gum!"
Then Mike Teavee. "Willy! I hate him, because he wouldn't let me go on television!"
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Then Charlie. "I loved that wonka man. He let me own the factory." [image on side]
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The Headstone
After the funeral they they put him in the hurse.
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Charlie had to make up a headstone. So he did.
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This Is What It was
FRONT
[image: "MR. WONKA THE BEST CHOCALATE Maker In THE WORLD"]
BACK
[image: "WONKA BAR"]
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"NICE stone!" said Grandpa Joe.

This is as far as I got on the book. If I recall correctly, the OCD part with all the body parts took me until the last day of school. Everything after that was written at the beginning of summer vacation.